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Another (better) cleaned-up edit I made of a commission I asked the great BlackBeWhite2k7 to make.
Original sketch on Furaffinity: “https://www.furaffinity.net/view/31708759/":https://www.furaffinity.net/view/31708759/
Original sketch on Inkbunny: “https://inkbunny.net/s/1894690":https://inkbunny.net/s/1894690
(The explanation for the circumstances if I don’t commission a comic of it happening.)
One day Twilight and Starlight are working on improving the “Want it, Need it” spell to make it less chaotic and keep it from going out of control. They made it so that whatever object they use the spell on will only be able to affect the single person of their choosing and it will only last for a short period of time, plus they also had Cadence teach them a few techniques to make the person affected less obsessive and more caring, gentle, and loving. They used several of them just to be sure one wouldn’t be enough to negate the obsessive nature.
After hours of sleepless efforts, they believed they got it right and decided to test it. Being overconfident in their magic skills and knowledge, they decided to make the focused person of the spell on Spike. They had ‘borrowed’ his Rarity plushy and were about to cast the spell on it, but as they shot the spell from their horns Spike flew in through one of the windows and snatched up his Rarity plushy. He was about to complain to them for taking it but was cut off as he quickly dodged the fast magical stream of hearts. The beam of hearts bounced off the crystal floor and began to ricochet all around the room, the three of them keeping it from hitting them.
The doors to the room open as Whoa Nelly backed into the room plot first, explaining that she’s a friend of Rarity’s and that she sent her to deliver some dresses Twilight ordered. When the “Want it, Need it” spell blasts her plot, surprising her and making it jiggle as floating hearts began to emit from it. Spike fly towards her to ask if she was alright, Twilight and Starlight tried to stop him, but once he got close enough it was too late. As his eyes made contact with the massive mounds of pony cheeks, his irises turned pink and his pupils turned into hearts as instead of seeing Whoa Nelly’s plot, he was seeing Rarity’s face.
As Whoa Nelly regained her bearings they were once again lost once again as Spike cups her cheeks while blushing intensely and staring at her plot with an innocent, loving gaze. He nervously confesses his feeling to her, not saying Rarity or describing what he loves about her, like how her eyes sparkle like precious jewels, her mane/coat being the softest and most stylish of any pony, how he loves her figure, saying it’s more angelic and beautiful than the princesses themselves, etc. After hearing all of this, Whoa Nelly becomes so speechless and flustered by his words, her mind racing with thoughts of how no man ever said anything remotely like that to her throughout her whole life and the fact that it’s coming from such an adorable dragon hunk just makes her swoon. She also fawns over each example he gave her, especially on how he said her figure was lovelier than the princesses themselves, but thinking how he could ever think somepony who’s all skin and bones like herself, clearly blissfully unaware of her actual figure. She then thinks about how he’s been caressing her flanks this whole time, lovingly looking at her plot while licking his lips. She wonders if he actually wants to kiss her THERE, the place she always dreamt of her man kissing and making out with.
She bashfully tells him how she never knew he noticed her or that he thought and felt about her that way. She tells him that he loves him too, calling him her little “Spikey Wikey” as she leans her plot to him, Spike happily going in for his long-awaited kiss with the girl of his dreams. Twilight and Starlight watch in horror and disgust as the events of their doing unfold in front of them.
Original sketch on Furaffinity: “https://www.furaffinity.net/view/31708759/":https://www.furaffinity.net/view/31708759/
Original sketch on Inkbunny: “https://inkbunny.net/s/1894690":https://inkbunny.net/s/1894690
(The explanation for the circumstances if I don’t commission a comic of it happening.)
One day Twilight and Starlight are working on improving the “Want it, Need it” spell to make it less chaotic and keep it from going out of control. They made it so that whatever object they use the spell on will only be able to affect the single person of their choosing and it will only last for a short period of time, plus they also had Cadence teach them a few techniques to make the person affected less obsessive and more caring, gentle, and loving. They used several of them just to be sure one wouldn’t be enough to negate the obsessive nature.
After hours of sleepless efforts, they believed they got it right and decided to test it. Being overconfident in their magic skills and knowledge, they decided to make the focused person of the spell on Spike. They had ‘borrowed’ his Rarity plushy and were about to cast the spell on it, but as they shot the spell from their horns Spike flew in through one of the windows and snatched up his Rarity plushy. He was about to complain to them for taking it but was cut off as he quickly dodged the fast magical stream of hearts. The beam of hearts bounced off the crystal floor and began to ricochet all around the room, the three of them keeping it from hitting them.
The doors to the room open as Whoa Nelly backed into the room plot first, explaining that she’s a friend of Rarity’s and that she sent her to deliver some dresses Twilight ordered. When the “Want it, Need it” spell blasts her plot, surprising her and making it jiggle as floating hearts began to emit from it. Spike fly towards her to ask if she was alright, Twilight and Starlight tried to stop him, but once he got close enough it was too late. As his eyes made contact with the massive mounds of pony cheeks, his irises turned pink and his pupils turned into hearts as instead of seeing Whoa Nelly’s plot, he was seeing Rarity’s face.
As Whoa Nelly regained her bearings they were once again lost once again as Spike cups her cheeks while blushing intensely and staring at her plot with an innocent, loving gaze. He nervously confesses his feeling to her, not saying Rarity or describing what he loves about her, like how her eyes sparkle like precious jewels, her mane/coat being the softest and most stylish of any pony, how he loves her figure, saying it’s more angelic and beautiful than the princesses themselves, etc. After hearing all of this, Whoa Nelly becomes so speechless and flustered by his words, her mind racing with thoughts of how no man ever said anything remotely like that to her throughout her whole life and the fact that it’s coming from such an adorable dragon hunk just makes her swoon. She also fawns over each example he gave her, especially on how he said her figure was lovelier than the princesses themselves, but thinking how he could ever think somepony who’s all skin and bones like herself, clearly blissfully unaware of her actual figure. She then thinks about how he’s been caressing her flanks this whole time, lovingly looking at her plot while licking his lips. She wonders if he actually wants to kiss her THERE, the place she always dreamt of her man kissing and making out with.
She bashfully tells him how she never knew he noticed her or that he thought and felt about her that way. She tells him that he loves him too, calling him her little “Spikey Wikey” as she leans her plot to him, Spike happily going in for his long-awaited kiss with the girl of his dreams. Twilight and Starlight watch in horror and disgust as the events of their doing unfold in front of them.
imported from https://derpibooru.org/images/2531597
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